I am a Year 6 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mr Bell.
Dre, I like your description of the gigantic whale pulling the string to break free and also the image that the whale came alive from the boy's kite. I think you have many more ideas to add to this story and I'd love to read it when you're finished.
Dre, I like your description of the gigantic whale pulling the string to break free and also the image that the whale came alive from the boy's kite. I think you have many more ideas to add to this story and I'd love to read it when you're finished.
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